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But losing herself in her thoughts...

New version, better colour balance I think. Added copyright info as well...
Old version is under "scraps", and can be found here. If you have the time, compare the two, and tell me if I got it right...

Full schoolgirl series:
Schoolgirl - Trying to study - fiddling - Cuddle - Teddy play nice
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~kittynn Mar 23, 2005
This has a very.. well, lolita-ish feel to it, I think. The pigtail-plaits, the long manicured fingernails, and the reclining pose all combine to give it a twisted innocence that would draw anyone in. It's a little too 'hot' for me (yellow, overexposed) but otherwise looks great.
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~anubiz Mar 24, 2005
Thnx for the comment, I tried to go for a bit of a mellow feel, hence the warm colours and the exploding reds...
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~stumbleine179 Jan 22, 2005   Photographer
Honestly, I think the pose and camera angle work for this shot. If were shooting a portrait for a paying customer, I doubt they would purchase a large print of this pose, but when your simply trying to create art, you can certainly get away with this. I think it captures the theme very nicely. The bored expression on her face makes it appear that she is daydreaming. I think that's what you were trying to get across. And it takes a certain amount of skill to add an element of sexuality in a scenerio that is normally non-erotic. The color balance is certainly a lot closer in this version as well. Great job, and great revision! :)
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~anubiz Jan 24, 2005
Thnx for stopping by, and for the comment... :) The daydreaming was indeed what I went for, glad it shows...
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~demondeath1 Jan 21, 2005
her poses is strange, and the facial emotion doesn't feel right. THe position of the camera could have been higher, for a better view of the books, and the girl.

so, for this.. I give.. 75/100
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~anubiz Jan 21, 2005
I see where you're coming from, the angle is a bit off-centre to create a twitst on a subject which has been explored... All in all, 75/100 not too bad. I might have something here... :)

thnx for your time.
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~demondeath1 Jan 21, 2005
sorry dude.. I'm just saying what I think.. The artist's knows best of his intentions... I'm just a little fly...
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~anubiz Jan 21, 2005
Hey, no need to apologise, I asked for your opinion, remember?
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~jamesandgiantsnails Jan 7, 2005   Photographer
good colours.. the team likes this a lot
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~anubiz Jan 9, 2005
Thnx... :)
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